Don’t instigate
Or insinuate
Or proclaim
Your ideas to me
Don’t recriminate me
Don’t accuse me
Don’t abuse me
Or misuse me
Just leave me alone
And I,
In turn,
Will do the same.
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Submitted: Dec 24, 2007 Reads: 88 Comments: 9 Likes: 3
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Irwin
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excellent. My sentiments entirely. Punchy, good use of words.
Posted: Dec 24, 2007
Nice Poem, I used to think that way still somewhat do but...
Posted: Dec 25, 2007
Very impressive poem. I thought it was very honest. Congratulations on your good use of expression.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
What makes this work so well is the short phrases all on seperate lines. It's great.
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
i love the message, but its written worst then a kindygardner, it seeems as though written by a very very smart kindygardner, which is worst than an average child,better to make your poems as primative as possible, and dont think as much Lucien Remeese
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
I like it! It reminds me of a song I sang once, but I must say, I like your poem MUCH better!
Awesome!
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
It feels to me like 'ouch'! Especially the end. SO indifferent and final. I like it.
Posted: Oct 19, 2008
THIS KICKS ASS. obviously a 'not taking any shizz' moment. very grand!!! xx
Posted: Oct 23, 2008
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