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Lost in Love as Lovers Flee

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


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Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Killing time in life’s decay
Lost in love and disarray
No one can save us
‘Cause nobody cares
No one will help us
‘Cause no one can hear
Killing pain in ecstasy
Lost in love as lovers flee
Nothing can save us
From our self-induced lie
Nothing can help us
As we lay down to cry
Killing fear in life’s embrace
Love is lost in fearful faith
No one could save us
‘Cause nobody cares
No one could help us
‘Cause none stopped to hear
Killing doubt as lovers flee
Faith is lost in misery
Nothing could save us
From self-induced lies
Nothing could help us
As we laid down to cry
Lost in love and disarray
Lost in love as lovers flee
Love is lost in fearful faith
And faith is lost in misery
When faced with truth
Why do we cry
For with our love
We’ll surely die.


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Comments:

TheWarrior

Its really good. Not your best, but I like the feeling in the poem. It gives it an aura of alive-ness. (Is that even a word?) Very well written.

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I know it sux. I just felt like publishing something.

Ichi Clairvoyance
Ichi_Clairvoyance

It's great. I agree with the previous comment, it isn't your best, but you cannot always surpass yourself. It is still beautiful, Wolfie-Sama.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it.



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