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Of Roses and Lilies in Autumn's Lust

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 10, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Translucent vibes ripple,
Through the
Dark, cold
Night,
The Moon’s
Light,
Illuminating the sylphic
Rain, nourishing
The roses, and
Lilies,
Gazing
At the stars, through
Dancing tree branches, and
Leaves
Turned red
And rust,
In Autumn’s Lust,
Tall
Pines, and red
Oaks tower,
Over whispering lovers,
Lost from
Tim,
Lost from
Reality,
Within
Surreality, within
Bliss,
Translucent vibes
Ripple, through their dark,
Cold night, the Moon’s light,
Illuminating
Their sylphic rain,
Nourishing them,
In
Autumn’s Lust,
Engulfing them, in
Autumn’s Lust,
The epitome, of
Autumn’s Lust.


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Comments:

Wolfie-Sama, after reading it again, I picked up more things. ^o^ The little twist of wording... amazing, simply amazing.

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I am overly-joyous. =^.^=

Your style of poetry never ceased to amaze me!
Excellent work!!

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank, I am always glad to hear from you.

beautiful it really makes you seem like you're there. i think you should have posted it a little later in the year though.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, 'cause I'm really known for making sense T_T Thank you for the comment.



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