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Poem By: Itsuwari
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Submitted: Jun 8, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

Fraught with fear

We fall

Together

Apart

Forever

We start

We

Stop

Flailing

Fearing

Screaming

Tearing

Away

Away

Away

Translucent shines

Silhouettes

In the

Night

Reminiscent

Reminders

Of lost lives

Of

Past lives

Or

Our life

Our strife

Falling

Together

Apart

Away

Away

Away

Nothingness

In everything

In nothing

Absoluteness

Abstract, obscene

Furiously

Contemplative

Furiously peaceful

Crawling

Through life

Our life

Tearing

Away

Our life

Tearing

Away

Away

Away…

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Comments:

Ichi Clairvoyance

Wow! That was amazing... I'm at a loss for words. ^^

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Really, here *riffles through a shoebox* I think I've got some in here you can use... Aha, "FUCKING AWESOME!"
Aww, thanks Otter-chan, I think it was awesome too.

LeAnne

my sister and i both like thiso one!

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, thank you both.

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