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Redemption of the Sacred Heart

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


It is not within the "norm" for me to write a poem meant to convey a specific feeling or idea to the reader. But inspiration is a bitch. This piece is about loosing your virginity. It's about no one in specific, just the act itself. Enjoy. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 4, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 7    Likes: 0   


Lying with the brazen Moon
I bed the night with lust,
To seek the Lady of my heart
And lay with Her my trust.

Too blatant, life can take control
Too subtle, She decieves,
I cannot know the hidden light
Or how Her love recieves.

If reality can loose Herself
Upon the barren ground,
The lillies life will enter there
The brazen light She's found.

My Moon,
My love,
My sweet abyss
I enter without pause
To find,
To lose,
My ending life
And seek through Her the cause.

Lying with the brazen Moon
I bed the night, my lust,
To seek redemption of my soul
I lay with her...


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Comments:

Wow,that was superb. And such a subject! Wonderful. Glad someone is mixing it up now and again with the more frank things in life.

~X

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

=^.^= Superb? You flatter me.

Some lines cut like a saber sword - deep

Posted: Sep 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Good to hear from you again. Still don't bother much with relavence, eh? Thank you very much for the comment.

you are a very good poet.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

You are very flattering. And quite a writer yourself, as I've said before. =^.^=

absoutly beautiful and how i envy the passion that slowly leaks off of your words

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, Eilis.

*looks down quickly* This is going to sound really... trite... but as I read this, my heart felt heavy...

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Do you feel "trite"?

WOW i mean no WOW thats all I can say its just really deep and wow.

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehehe, I'm glad you liked this one. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Of course. I like all your work

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

xD



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