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Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 Reads: 258 Comments: 22 Likes: 15
Silently screaming
We bleed
We feel
Silently speaking
We need
We kneel
Silently we bow
To reality
Silently working
We slip
We fall
Silently singing
We yell
We call
Silently we plead
For an escape
Silently walking
On
And on
Silently mourning
For lost
For gone
Silently we crie
To death
Silently screaming
We bleed
We feel
We need
We kneel to reality
We slip
We fall
We yell
We call for an escape
On
And on
For lost
For gone to death
We silently scream
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I really love this one! I love the syle you chose!
Great work, keep it up!
---Kcy:]
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
i like ur poems where they have small bits. it shows u can convey an emotion without coming out and saying it.
Posted: Dec 30, 2007
awesome poem. really like it. keep up the great work!
Posted: Dec 31, 2007
Very well written. I really enjoyed this. I loved the imagery. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa
Posted: Dec 31, 2007
Really good! I can hear the rhythm of your words in song. (Musician at heart)
MA
Posted: Dec 31, 2007
Yay! I love this poem. You may find it conceded or arogant to comment on my own writing, but I love this soooo much. I can't believe I wrote it. It's so awesome! Yay! If you read this please comment on my work, I would love to know what you think.
Posted: Dec 31, 2007
I really liked the style of this poem and how it flowed so nicely.
Posted: Jan 2, 2008
I absolutely adore your style. It's lyrical, flowing, and choppy, which is almost as redundant as "silently screaming". I love how it all fits! Amazing. Pure genius.
Posted: Jan 9, 2008
oh wow
this really is cool
awesome awesome job
and btw none of my comments really do ur poems any justice but i will keep commenting anyway :P haha
Posted: Jan 20, 2008
Wow, this was pretty intense. Nice Job
Posted: Jan 23, 2008
This was really nice work. Good job. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
this really is a poem to go back to and read again. i know it is sorta stupid to comment twice but i really like it.
peace out____Lydia____
PS i have very few poems of others that i will go back and read.
Posted: Feb 8, 2008
i really enjoyed this writing! very well done!
Posted: Feb 9, 2008
I remember reading this on the bus. I loved it, its always your poetry that gives people a sense of connection
Posted: Feb 19, 2008
Love the poem, I think you really got your point across, but I'm 'silently screaming' that you keep spelling cry wrong, is it just your personal preferance of the spelling???
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
Nice. And deep.
Posted: Apr 25, 2008
Blunt and straightforward, wonderfully written. ~X
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
you have a different poetry writing style then myself and most i've seen on here..but thats not a bad thing..i find it refreshing..something different..great job :) love the poem
Posted: Sep 11, 2008
this is amazing. I love the way it flows and rymes. it's just.. amazaing!! better than anything I have done, or could do! i love it!!
Posted: Sep 18, 2008
That was very very nice. It flows perfectly and transmitts great feeling. Rock on.
Posted: Oct 14, 2008
I’ve got to say you do well with words. You know where they can go when you want them to sound good. This poem is really good. I like it and I enjoy reading it. It has feeling in it…some in which I understand very deeply. Reading it gave me my point of view in life *thinking it*…very nice.
Posted: Oct 14, 2008
As everything in our pains and sufferings keep topping one another, they all fall . . Good style.
Posted: Oct 15, 2008
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