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Sinful Men

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Bloodied men
Grieving men
Shadowed men
Haunted men
Have they sinned? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 16, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 5    Likes: 0   


Bleeding
Screaming
Death
Forgiveness
Forgiveness
Forgiveness
Laughing
Singing
Death
Forgive me
Forgive me
Forgive me
Slowing pulse
Thriving flesh
Death
Have I sinned
Have I sinned
Have I sinned?
Grenades
Guns
Grotesque death
Forgiveness
Forgiveness
Forgiveness
Children
Women
Innocent death
Forgive me
Forgive me
Forgive me
Homes
Bombs
Merciless death
Have I sinned
Have I sinned
Have I sinned?
I have sinned
Father, forgive me
I know not what I do
Anger
Regret
Grief
Sorrow
Forgiveness
Forgive me
I have sinned
Grotesque
Innocence
Mercilessly
Death
Repent
Repent
Repent
Forgiveness
Forgiveness…


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Comments:

Ichi Clairvoyance
Ichi_Clairvoyance

Powerful to say the least! :O

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

I wish, just once, you would say the most xP
Thank you very much for the comment. =^.^=

Vampire Roxas
Vampire_Roxas

A lot of death, but i love it. uber awesome

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I love death too :P

Vampire Roxas
Vampire_Roxas

Death is awesome. Who wouldn't love it. :D

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Death is inconsequential, so there is no need to fear it, but that doesn't make it awesome.

Vampire Roxas
Vampire_Roxas

Why are you always doing that to me??

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I don't know ='(

Vampire Roxas
Vampire_Roxas

aww dont be sad

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Okay =^.^=



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