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Superficial Substitutionalization of Imagination Through Regulation of 'Proper Sophistication'

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Tags: poetry, life

This is about the process everyone goes through as they grow up and are forced to conform to the social 'norm' and thusly loose a lot of the open-mindedness and non-conformist points of views that allow for innocence and a greater understanding of true truth, as opposed to society's fallacy. Hope you enjoy and please comment. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 26, 2007    Reads: 52    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Superficial substitutionalization
A formation of frustration
Institutionalization from appellation
The aggregation vocation
Of simulation
Fallacious temptation sensation
From admiration
An animation
On debasing situations
And ongoing inflation
Of capitalization
An aberration
Of misinterpretation
On the basis
Of accusation
Superficial substitutionalization
A diversification
Of anti-conservation
A transformation
Of the pariah nonconformists
And political iconoclasts
A silencing infiltration
Of our only salvation
A re-education
A corruption of our minds
An implication
And anti-innovation
Of our free will
Of what makes us whole
Censorship of imagination
Superficial substitutionalization
The demonization
Of angelifacation
Through congregation
The wickedest of all fates
And perhaps
The most inexorable there of.


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Comments:

Wow. VERY nice choice of diction to suit your theme. I highly enjoyed, and can empathize with the instated struggle

Posted: Dec 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you.

You have an AMAZING vocabulary. I love your writing! ITs so strong.

---Kcy:]

Posted: Dec 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Yay! Positive feed on my crazy theory on growing up, this pleases me. Thanks for all the comments, I love knowing what people think about my work, I'm a little unsure sometimes. Most of the time I know I suck though. But people reading and knowing and sharing is all i care about. Thanks again for the comments.

not to sound stupid or anything, but i have no idea what you said. keep writing. just stuff i understand without a dictionary.
peace out.______xxemoxbfsxx_______

Posted: Dec 31, 2007

Author Comment:

You don't sound stupid at all, just ignorant. lol

So true! I definately identify with the struggle between conformity vs. non-conformity. I would like to think I'm a rebel but...great job either way.

Posted: Nov 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Rebellion is unecessary, to be a nonconformist is not to rebel, but to embrace. Do you understand the difference?



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