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Sweet Wounds From Sullen Thorns

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 7, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Only the most beautiful flowers are allowed to bear thorns

Blood drips from my wound
Sweet the scent that spreads
Clearing the air of these lies
And sullen thoughts from my head

A sullen prick
From the thorns of love
So sweet this rose
Embraced by dove

How sullen these cries
I cannot hear
Your whispers hide me
From sweet despair

We curl beneath
This sweet full moon
No more blood
From sullen wounds

I will protect you
From sullen tears
If your sweet voice can shield me
From hounding fears

So intoxicatingly sweet
This sylphic bond
Reminiscence cannot find
Your sullen song

Dancing in the rain
Sitting beneath the sweet moon
Together we can ignore
The blood that drips from sullen wounds.

But only the most beautiful flower is allowed to bear thorns.


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Comments:

Wolfie-Sama!!! I'm at my friend's house, so I was lucky to have the time to post this comment, but I really love it. I like how you worded it, making it have true meaning to only you and myself. This is a beautiful poem, one of my favorites.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I am glad you like it. =^.\=

true! i agree with the last line.
and nice poem by the way!!
i enjoyed reading it!

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I am glad you liked it. I believe that a poem is as beautiful as that which inspired it.



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