The Rose Embraced by Dove

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Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry

Dedicated to Otter (Ichi Clairvoyance) Formerly known as Cupcake-chan. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 7, 2008 Reads: 91 Comments: 19 Likes: 11

The basis of the surreal
Even withered, you are unbelievable beautiful
Glowing, translucent petals made of moonlight
Sylphic this little marvel, your existence
Ever the dove will embrace the rose in your presence

The heart and soul of my everything
And yet I cannot comprehend you
Living within the soul of you, your sweet abyss
Miraculous this little wonder, your trust
Always your life will have such meaning to me

This reminiscence of fear
Your words so meaningful, there is nothing to fear
Seeing your soul, feeling your voice
Profound, this peace in my heart
Calm and serene is our love.

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Comments:

LeAnne
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aww, how very sweet!!
i loved this one.
some say that love may be the best cure out there.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Unless, of course, it's the problem, though that is not the case here.

Ichi Clairvoyance

Holy (insert name of curse word here)!!!! This is my favorite poem so far, but not for the obvious reasons. I'm glad that you think of things that way.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Maybe I don't. Maybe I can summon inspiration on a whim and manipulate any wording to sound sincere. I, of course, cannot though. I'm glad you like this one, it is probably my favorite, though you did practically write it (inadvertant as it may have been).

xxemoxbfsxx

this is so sweet. wonderful discription. it seems like i haven't heard from you in forever, just thought i'd stop by.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I love hearing from you, I'll have to catch up on your work when I find some time.

TheWarrior

What a glorious, meaningful poem! I love the imagery and the subtle nuances. It was very flowing and had a feel to it that I expect a poem of this sort to have. Beautifully wrought.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, your praise is quite flattering.

Silver Main

Absolutly wonderful, I love it. It sounds like you think of this person fandly...

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Fondly. Yes, it is a mirror to the poem she wrote for me.

Codey

Amazing poem. It really captures in its rhythm and imagery and everything, love.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, it was thusly inspired.

Runefaust

Very nice, Sir. I like the second stanza a lot and I just like the emotion of it all. :]

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it.

ReganFinch

Hey Itsuwari. That first stanza left me stunned. The beauty of this piece goes beyond a "great poem". This is art. Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Your words flatter me, thank you.

SomeoneCrazy

Whoa!!! This is awesome!! Very Very Very good job and very well written!! I love it!!

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

As I've said before, it was well inspired. Thank you for commenting.

Svetlana

Brilliant work!!!!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Again, thank you.

anabiosis

ooh, i like this one. very pretty.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. =^.^=

zairafirefly

this is amazing and really beautiful. i hardly ever write poetry any more, but this makes be want to ^_^

Posted: Sep 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Then please do! And let me know when you post it. =^.^= Thank you very much for the comment.

jalvarado2008

Nicely done, enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep it up!

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.

jerkulez

The second verse makes it sound
beautiful piece

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Again, thank you very much.

Eilis333

oh oh this poem gave me an idea voila i have inspriation thank you my wonderful muse

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Just doing my job, as they say, "Inspiration is never found, only inherited."

Love Reaper

Too beautiful for words.

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh? I think the fact that you took the time to say any words at all says everything. Thank you.

KarenMeadows

very very nice, another beautiful work

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Again, thank you. It is greatly appreciated.

viper

That was very sweet.Really good and romantic.I really enjoyed this alot.Good job.

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, it joys me to know others enjoy my work. =^.^=

QueenDragonLady

I would be honored if you let me be a fan, and admirerer or your work. This was so passionate and well thought out, something I have been only capable of dreaming about, the way you made your words flow with emotion and confidence was magnificent!

"The heart and soul of my everything
And yet I cannot comprehend you
Living within the soul of you, your sweet abyss
Miraculous this little wonder, your trust
Always your life will have such meaning to me"

These were the most heart felt verses to me, I have not been able to read a work like this in a long time. If you can make me a promise, NEVER EVER STOP WRITING! You were blessed with this gift, and it would be a shame to stop using it! I mean this with my whole heart, this was a beautiful poem! :D

Posted: Oct 30, 2008