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Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Ahhh, to be alone. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 10, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


Unmitigated
Nihilism
Falling through
Lost to envy
Greed and pride
We hide
Behind these false emotions
Lost to the world
We seek out others
To be alone
Together,
Unadulterated
Insouciance
Falling through
Lost to jealousy
Sloth and rage
We run
Away from blatant fear
Living in this world
We seek out others
To be alone
Together
To be alone
As one
To be alone
At last alone.


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Comments:

hi! itsuwari. u've take a strong stab at the seven deadly sins and out comes this wonderful verse. v seek companionship yet r lonely. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much. I was afraid people wouldn't catch the symbology, but I think capitalizing the six and implying the seventh helped. Thanks again.

*sigh* i love it. ^-^

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Was the sigh really necassary? =^.^= Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.

I know that it's too late to say this and that it probably won't change anything, but... I'm really sorry...

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

It's never too late, but it is completely unnecessary, seeing as how you have little to apologize for.

i absolutly love it, amazing. great work.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you yet again. I'm overjoyed by your reactions. =^.^=

awsome i loved it you know what i love everything you write

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? I'm sure I could write something you don't like =^.^=

Only you would make a poem of the seven deadly sins. lol i love it anyway. ^,-,^

Posted: Nov 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Eight deadly sins. =^.^= Thank you.



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