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Unwanted Angels

Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


The oppisite of up is not always down. The oppisite of love is never hate, it is simply indifference. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Falling
Falling
Screaming cloud,
Bleeding ignorance
In and out,
Of living beings
Spirit,
Soul
Forces guiding,
Lost,
Unknown
Unbound by limitations,
They fall in
And out
Of life
Of love,
Below,
Above
Creations of god,
The force in us all,
Falling
Falling
They ascend,
They fall
Crying ignorance
Sweat and blood
Falling
Falling
Screaming cloud,
They fall in
And out
Of life
Of love,
Below,
Below,
Below us all
They ascend
They fall
Pleading ignorance,
Falling
Falling,
Fallen.


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Comments:

wow, that's really sad, but some how beautiful in a way. Call me crazy, but it's what I get out of it.

...Someone (sorry I can't reveal myself, because of other people and this is my extra acount) :DDDD

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

That is fine, is it my place to question your secrecy? I think it is not. Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you could see the beauty in it.

I prolly should have wrote this in a commetn, but I never was one for rules or ethics. My responce to your responce for my comment. :D!!! I can't tell you who I am, cus other people could read what I say and I'll tell you that I have already talked to you on my other account, but I really cant tell you here. Someone might see and it would defeat the purpose. :D hehhe!


xxxsomeone

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Well now. I shall take this as a challenge. When I know who you are, I will tell no one. Oh, I do very much enjoy secrets. However silly or direly important they are.

I... wow. :O

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

=^.^= Thank you.



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