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Poem By: Itsuwari
Poetry


Tags: poetry

Blah blah black jeep,
Want you any fuel?
No sir, no sir,
One last meal.
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Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Literal
Literal
Guestimations
Lol
In and out of consciousness
Reality unbound
Literally translated
Undefined and
Unaware
Unassuming of the consequence
Lottery
And lost
The rights taken
News and knowledge here
And found
Ignorance or not
The world forgot
Ten
Doses of caffeine
Literal
Literal
Guestimate the cost
Built in calculator
10 x 12...?
Too much
L
O
L


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Comments:

I'm not sure that my mind can process that... but it reminds me of how I think when I'm really tired. ^-^

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Seriously!?! That's totally how I wrote it, I didn't think anyone would get that.

i understood it probably because im tired and when im tired things make sense.

Posted: Nov 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmmm, makes sense to me.



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