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Customs of Loving

Poem By: Iviedoe
Poetry


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Submitted: Jan 5, 2008    Reads: 71    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   




~~~Customs of Loving~~~

To recognize what is lacking~
And with truth and love rise to meet the need.
To understand if and when the ground is fertile~
And be in season to sow a loving seed.
Always listening for God's true and loving voice~
Waiting in His time, and His will, then taking His heed.
It takes one wanting to be made into a certain vessel~
Living just to be of this merciful, unique breed.
Beating out your every word to show~
That you mean them sincerely by your deed.
Revealing the lies of the truthless and the dead~
Knowing the battle will prove you in the lead.
Consider all you meet as your life goes~
As Divine interventios teaching lessons that YOU need.
Being willing to take a bullet for another~
Knowing the last thing you'll do on earth is bleed.
Do to others as you want to be done~
Being your life's motto and your every motive's creed.
These are some of the customs of loving~
Kindness, patience, grace, and mercy in deed.

Iviedoe 11.14.07


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Comments:

very lovely and enjoyable read! Has a nice flow and rhthym to it. Hope to read more of your work in the future and feel free to check out and comment on mine!
Happy writing.................Jerry

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much for your review. you really know how to put imagery into one of these as well...I have been to your site and did enjoy the read. hope my review was as complimentary as yours.

O yes Nearly all can recite and live by the 7 deadly sins but who can recite and live by the many Heavenly virtues .
Lovely read and beautiful layout.

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I truely thank you. I'm speachless by your response and I hope I can live up to this one in future pieces.

Dody
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Lovely, Iviedoe - I am a Doe too! Welcome!

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Author Comment:

us doe's got to stick together !!! I'm so happy that you enjoyed the piece it's on of my favorites as well. Happy thoughts while counting the cost...

Loved the flow...... great read.......Take care Juliet

Posted: Jan 5, 2008

Author Comment:

dear Juliette, these are words that came to me obviously from the Lord and i can't take too much credit..i am so very awed that it has touched you enough to provoke you to wright to me. Thank You very much and I hope to visit your site very soon, Iviedoe



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