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Submitted: Mar 1, 2007 Reads: 69 Comments: 6 Likes: 0
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I really like this poem, the rhyming doesn't seem forced and is filled with emotion.
Posted: Mar 1, 2007
Wicked! I loved it! Very well written, it flows and has a great rythme!
Posted: Mar 2, 2007
Yea, well, I love my TV too...and it doesn't talk back
....for that I am thankful..now, if it ever does, I will worry...til then..I'll just enjoy it....lol..cute idea for a poem..
Posted: Mar 2, 2007
Love your piece. Wrote a similar one recently.
~brinsley
Posted: Aug 25, 2007
Very creative and well written piece.
I enjoyed it, good write : )
Posted: Sep 10, 2007
I really liked it, funny, flowed pretty well.
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
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