Limerick – Jack Steals Food.
Jack stole an apple to get
Money and began to fret.
He told that if his name wasn’t Jack,
Itching was beginning on his back,
So he flew off to escape in a jet.
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My first try at a limerick - and notice that Jack in this poem is NOT me! It's just funny, and silly. View table of contents...
Submitted: Sep 2, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 7 Likes: 0
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??? maybe it's just me (and it might be) but i just don't get it...
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
it is funny. lol. i liked it.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
JACK SMART - WOOF WOOF WOOF
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Hehe it is a little humorous, personally I don't get limericks that often unless I read them a couple times over. It was different, but also good and nicely done ;-)
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
It was interesting! :D
And funny of course! :D
though in one of the lines, "He told that if his name wasn’t Jack", it might make it flow a little better if 'told' was changed to 'said'. But that is just my opinion! :D
Nice job Jack! :D
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
I'm have done any limericks but that was good. Very clever!
Posted: Sep 4, 2008
I get...At first it wasn't funny...But the more I think about it...LOL. I couldn't write a limerick if I tried. Three cheers for Jack! (You.)
He he...
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
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