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ONE RED ROSE

Poem By: jadey oneil
Poetry


one red rose...
ignored.
unwanted.
rejected!

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Submitted: May 29, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


One red rose---

From his Garden of Eden,

Sans stain, not a feign;

Perfect with its own flaws.

* * *

One red rose---

Carefully touched and nurtured,

Cherished and adored

It glows as it grows.

* * *

One red rose---

Messenger of hisheart,

His passion and art

Does she know its cost?

* * *

One red rose---

As fragile as crystal ball,

Flaunted with his soul;

She waters it with snows!


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Comments:

perfect with its own flaws...ooh, I like that! I guess that speaks to all of us :-)

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Speaking about life, you're exactly right. I always believe that life is a marriage of opposites and that what's make it perfect. Thanks, Emily! :-)

This poem is so nice, so beautiful, Jadey.

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

You always make me smile. :-)
Thanks! :-)

flavorful writings. good expansion in this, this blooms well, the message is clear and accented nicely.

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you haven't just tasted it. You've savored it. Thanks, Wolffe. Your comment always makes more insightful in every slightest detail. ^^

This was really perfect poem. :)

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^^



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