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one red rose...
ignored.
unwanted.
rejected!
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Submitted: May 29, 2008 Reads: 56 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
One red rose---
From his Garden of Eden,
Sans stain, not a feign;
Perfect with its own flaws.
* * *
One red rose---
Carefully touched and nurtured,
Cherished and adored
It glows as it grows.
* * *
One red rose---
Messenger of hisheart,
His passion and art
Does she know its cost?
* * *
One red rose---
As fragile as crystal ball,
Flaunted with his soul;
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perfect with its own flaws...ooh, I like that! I guess that speaks to all of us :-)
Posted: May 29, 2008
This poem is so nice, so beautiful, Jadey.
Posted: May 29, 2008
flavorful writings. good expansion in this, this blooms well, the message is clear and accented nicely.
Posted: May 29, 2008
This was really perfect poem. :)
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
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