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S I L H O U E T T E

Poem By: jadey oneil
Poetry


Life has its own unfortunate events. Since we can't just choose the kind of life we love to have, we begin to live up to whatever that is within reach. It may not be pleasing but we just have to hold onto it to be able to...survive.

When someone becomes a slave of this circumstance, judgement is never ours.

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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 77    Comments: 15    Likes: 10   


She hides herself behind her shadow

Under filthy and smoky canopy

Cold as the night, dark as ebony

Praised by many, known by few.

* * *

Laughter and cheers and yells and whistles---

Wreath of laurel from public accolades;

Touch and hold and hugs and kisses---

Ardent game played by heedless heads.

* * *

She’s her own fame, low price for a shame

Apple of the eye that lasts overnight

Most wanted with a borrowed name

A Magdalene to blinds’ sight.

* * *

Thicker, darker--- clouds gather above

Hiding the heavenly light, comforting---

Fading glow she has learned to love

Tomorrow, she’s forgotten.


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Comments:

hmmmm interesting.
is this about a prostitute? lol i'm sorry if that sounds like a silly question. but in the tags it says "stripper" so i began reading it, keeping that in mind. and then i began thinking of the movie Moulin Rouge - its about a prostitute that falls in love. good movie. but thats besides the point!

the poem!

i'm concluding that she's a prostitute. this is the life she not necessarily wanted, though life is full of choices and she chose this path - however she didn't really have much choice.

"but we just have to hold onto it to be able to...survive."
-that's the sad truth. there's people out in this world who have to resort to things like this b/c its the only way to survive. and so she's imprisoned by this job, ashamed of it.
a pretty face that can make one night memorable but "tomorrow she's forgotten" b/c c'est la vie! she was just a one night stand. nothing special, even if it meant something to her
*sighs*
this is rather sad :(
but this is life and this is truth.
excellent work big sis ^^ you've really captured some of the hard truths of the real world. its sad life style, but for some people its the only way.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep, this piece is about one. It's really sad when one doesn't have much choice in life. Living always means survival. A fighter makes a wise choice choosing between the devil and the deep blue sea while a coward handles it through suicidal attempts. Well, as you put it, that's life!

Thanks a bunch, lil sis! ^^

Very interesting pov for the world's oldest profession. I've always wondered how bad it would have to get to have to make that sort of choice.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

I think tsuch choice is the last resort for those who have been forced to get into it. Anyone tends to do anything to keep breathing. It's sad to know that each breath costs that much. :-(

Thanks for commenting, Em! :-)

A NICE POEM

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^^

This is such a warm tribute to the girls who are subjected to this life...i am sure very few chose this profession for fun and money and rest r just forced...

U know what buddy, if this profession would not have been there, the crime rates would have soared high...

So sad that being females also, we hate them instead of really reading their minds....

lovely poem honey...

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I doubt if anyone wants to get into such profession for fun. It must be something serious. I think most are doing it because there aren't much choices to choose from. It really feels sad. :-(

Thanks for commenting, buddy! ^^

Great work.
The path that wasn't in the plans growing up, but like you're saying, life takes us down it's own path sometimes. That's the tough reality.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

I love how you put it, "The path that wasn't in the plans growing up". I strongly agree. Parents won't think about it even once. But, time takes us to strange places. ^^

Thanks for commenting. ^^

This is an excellent piece of litterature! I love the realism that you put into the piece, and as Devilrod said nicely " life takes us down it's own path sometimes"

Great work!

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad I gave justice to this piece. Your comment means a lot, Brad. Thanks! ^^

Wow jadey. This is the first poem that I have read from you and yet I don't know how you could top it! This is absolutely amazing poem with so many layers and messages. You describe the "profession" and the emotions tied to it very well. You are an extremely talented poet :)

Regan

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, Regan, you made me smile. I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks a bunch! ^^

This has to be one of my favourites. Your words, and what you do with them just amaze me everytime. I'm serious when I say you have such talent Jadey! I will have to come back to read this one again after I've had some sleep as I'm at the end of my nightshift. :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Take your time and suit yourself, Nix. The door is always open. Thanks a bunch. ^^

This poem makes me sad, when I read it.. it is a life praised by many but despised my many including herself. Wonderful poem, I love your writing
Olwen

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

It's really sad b/c it's a profession that is looked down by many. Thus, one can hardly be proud of it. Thanks for the comment, Olwen! ^^

Yeah, I'd think it would be a horrible life to live and I think its about not having other options for most poeple. Your poem it wonderful and has siuch a nice easy flow that its a joy to read. Sad subject matter, but a great poem.

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Reality bites. :-(

Thanks for the comment, Buttercup! ^^

Wow,poem is great.Really.Its just so clear.I love it.Great work!Like alway.

:)

Posted: Jul 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! *smiles*

I'd love to see somebody write a poem about the life of a prostitute which wasn't putting the profession down. Guess it would be quite the challenge. Very nice poem, I enjoyed the structure and the story behind it. Very nice to see a poem in which every line contributes significantly!

Very good :)

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

As what I've written in the intro page, judgement is never ours. :-)

Your comment made me smile. :-)

Thanks, Odahk! ^^

wow, great... nicely expressed, but an advise to you will be to select the title carefully, the title you wrote doesn't really attract that much as the poem does AFTER reading it, the intro of the poem is great, keep it up.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I was thinking about a mysterious character. So, I came up with that title. Nonetheless, I'm taking your suggestion into account. Thanks a bunch! :-)

Well I must say I have to disagree with s ponderer - the title intruiged me! And I think it captures the essence of the person you describe, sort of a shadowy, here today, gone tomorrow character "Praised by many, known by few" - a S I L H O U E T T E indeed. (sorry copied and pasted to make sure I spelt correctly!)

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You, Anna! ^^

it's scary right??

i wish no one loses herself in the darkness and MAY GOD help that soul...
I have been through that phase and i can say confidently that " I UNDERSTAND and EMPATHISE"....

I loved this dark poem....brought so many realities....

JADEY, honey, please don't STOP writing....NEVER...GOD speaks through YOU to ME...

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

:-)



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