This is the third poem I wrote for my friend, Pisceanmood. "I'd Rather Be The Raindrops" and "Forbidden" were the first two. If you have read those, this piece is written along those lines. ^^

Pisceanmood, thanks for letting me publish this on Booksie. I was just teasing when i wrote this. xD

*I've posted this again because something happened the first time I did it* View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

Tears fall down from your eyes

When cupid’s call falls upon closed doors

I smile at your mournful flow'rs

As I whisper "Goodbye, gloomy skies."

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In the solace of our garden,

where those bright scarlet petals used to shine,

My heart pines

But what has become of Eden?

* * *

 

I welcome each bright sunny day

Lest I'll be paler than your roses

But amid sunlight kisses

A bolt of lightning still strikes me.

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Comments:

Pratibha

First and foremost - WHERE WERE YOU SO LONG???

AND the wait was worth it....such an inrense poem ...all the laws of nature are there and they just made the read lovely as if I AM THE NARRATOR....


But amid sunlight kisses
A bolt of lightning still strikes me.

AMIDST such lovely words - why a bolt of lightning honey??

LOVELY RHYMING....and even lovelier YOUR WORDS...

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Love always finds its way to touch you. ^^
Thanks for commenting, Buddy!

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