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On a rainy Sunday

Poem By: James Gagiikwe
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 15, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


This vista in my memoried youth recalled

on a rainy Sunday morning in my aged day.

White gleaming forest,

these stunted trees row and rank stand,

seeming as alabaster in the noon sun,

stretching endless beyond the eyes’ compass.

Gravel avenues, pencil pines and spreading yews

the rolling grounds adorn for those who

can never go home again.

And names carved on granite walls

in these pleasant Italian hills exchanged

their lives for my current freedoms.

Cross and Magen David mark their place,

these companions of my father’s war.

This encounter in my innocent youth recalled

on a rainy Sunday morning in my aged day.

Chalk white the villas

in Porto Fino in the noon sun,

heat radiating from walls

as we explore the village.

At street level two sawhorses erected on a porch,

stand as a poor man’s catafalque adorned,

a cheap coffin leaking putrefaction.

Fishing village smells overcome,

no breath of salty breeze refreshing

this unavoidable end of man,

no fragrant boughs

of Mediterranean pine masking

this rotting corruption

awaiting burial this July day.

Yet, this truth recalled in my aged day,

relearned at a rainy Sunday matins:

“And death shall have no dominion.”

So sing me a Te Deum on that day,

or recite the Kaddish in my hearing,

equally will I praise God

for His life eternal,

for no memoried vista

or stark encounter

can force back again

his rolled stone.

Notes: Line 3-14, WW2 US military cemetery, northern Italy.

Line 17-30, Porto Fino, Italian Riviera.


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Comments:

wow. had trouble understanding what you meant at times but other than that, wonderful imagery. You use great vocabulary and have complicated sentence structures. I also like the fact that your poems don't always rhyme. Why would they have to? There's no need. I really liked it, although I might have to read a couple more times before Im certain I understand everything proposed.

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Deane,

The computer is telling me I haven't replied . My memory says I have. Oh well. My apologies if I didn't reply to your two comments.

Thank you for reading Sunday, and those pipes.

No, not many rhymes at the end of lines in my poems. Some internal rhymes tho, from time to time; but not deliberate.

If you can muster up an Irish accent, try reading those pipes again, aloud.

On a rainy Sunday is a comparison. The first two examples are from my childhood, as I was effectively confronted with death for the first time. I have seen lots of death in the decades in between! The third stanza is how I feel now. Big difference.

JG

Deane,
Thank you for reading Sunday.

It is a juztaposition of three experiences, all dealing with the reality of death. The two Italian ones are from my childhood, the third from now, many decades later. The first two are negative, or at least somber. The third is victorious.

JG

Posted: Sep 19, 2008



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