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REQUIEM in a SMALL TOWN

Poem By: James Gagiikwe
Poetry


Viet Nam War poetry. Written for an Australian-speaking audience.
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Submitted: Nov 19, 2007    Reads: 66    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


REQUIEM in a SMALL TOWN[No. 5713739, 5/RAR]

 

City fringed patchwork of flock, forest, field and herd,

luxuriously arid land,

painted in eucalypt and gibber.

In stubbled fields begging rain –

soils compacted by tractors –

coffin ranked rows of drying hay bales laude and honour our

sons, husbands, brothers, friends.

 

Stubbled in ‘Nam,

lie they now on our

compacted hearts – begging remembrance.

Begging –

but our austral parks and ageing cenotaphs

subscribe to colonial virtues – Lest We Forget.

 

Lest We Forget –

Imperial lies and Anglophile stones

with no space allowed for our disowned dead.

 

Forget? –

Cuneiform holes, sandbagged, sour with their sweat.

Forget? –

Smouldering flesh begging body bags.

 

Lest We Forget –

those jackeroo statesmen who mustered, knackered

and consumed our generation in their pride.

Lest We Forget –

That in our protests we proclaimed them “Anathema” to us.

To us –

safe in the Dreamtime of our distant and callous rhetoric.

 

Coffin ranked lay they now

in our stubbled and compacted memories –

begging acceptance.

More than park or monument seek they

in this luxuriously arid land.

 

 

 

 

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© J. Gagiikwe 1968

 

[Lance Corporal Marenko “Tich” Thomas, No. 5713739, 5th Battalion/Royal Australian Regiment. KIA: July 8, 1966, age 21. Born in Yugoslavia, raised in Nannup Shire. Western Australia’s first Viet Nam War National Service KIA. Buried in Nannup Cemetery, local park named after him]


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Comments:

James Gagiikwe:

Interesting choice, treatment and presentation. Of serious and difficult topic. Vietnam war. Choice of vocabulary is intriquing in that it is soft enough to not shock or offend. While making your points quite well. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Nov 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Ed, Thank you for your comment Ed. Glad you liked it. You might need an Australian dictionary to pick up on the double entendres.

I was very close to Tich's family. The village was still feeling the repercussions of his death 20 years later.

The Vietnamese refugee community supplied the statue for his memorial.

Regards,
James G.



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