Beyond the Veil, a poem by Jason George

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Poem By: Jason George
Poetry

Tags: sirius, black, harry, potter, order, of, the, phoenix, jason, george, veil

I wrote this after I read Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. It was one of my very first poems. Enjoy! View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 6, 2008 Reads: 30 Comments: 3 Likes: 0

When my Godfather fell,
I didn't take to it well.
I wanted to know what was
Beyond the Veil
As tears filled my eyes,
I thought in surprise.
I want to know what is
Beyond the Veil

Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a demise that waits.
Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a deadly fate.

As the rag takes away
The thoughts in my head,
I have to know what is
Beyond the Veil
When Dumbledore said
That Sirius was dead,
I had to know what was
Beyond the Veil.

Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a demise that waits.
Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a deadly fate.

Would I ever
Solve the case,
As to what was
Beyond the Veil?
Would I ever see
Sirius again,
If I found out what was
Beyond the Veil?

Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a demise that waits.
Beyond the dirty,
Ragged veil
Is a deadly fate.

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Comments:

Alice Oiseau

ooo i liked the repetition of the black veil! it really shows how curious and drawn to it the speaker is! well, in this case, harry ^^
a decent poem :) i've never written anything based off a book so this was a creative idea on your behalf!
a poem nicely written!
keep it up jason! ^^

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much, Alice. I appreciate your enthusiasm. :)

xxxNightxxxWalkerxxx

This is pretty good for a first poem. I think you captured Harry's feelings on the matter very well. Well, as well as I would think. Or something...haha sorry. Sometimes I get a little lost. I hope you get what I mean. Good job anyway!

Posted: Aug 6, 2008