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Slowly Drowning Version 1
By: JBrewer
Page 1, I wrote 2 versions of this trying to get it just right. Still not sure if I am happy with it, I may have to try again.
It shudders,
I know it's coming.
Thin ice, I hate walking on you.
I can feel it cracking,
breaking apart.
It shatters,
I can feel it now.
Thin ice, nothing you can do.
You've fallen to pieces,
you have frozen my heart.
It Freezes,
I gasp for breath.
Cold water, tears at my chest.
I choke, no yell,
I panic, I can't scream.
It Destroys,
I close my eyes.
Cold water, lays me to rest.
I remember you,
In all my thoughts, in every dream.
My heart stops,
I'm drowning,
I'm drowning,
That's how I know it's love,
because my heart's been calling for you.
By: Jeremy Brewer
Poetry Embrace
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