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My lovely little flower

Poem By: JeremyM
Poetry


Just for fun, I'd love to know what you think this poem is about. :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 3, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


A flower pot
Sits on my sill
A little seed
Tucked in the soil

I pick up a cup
And fill it with water
Not to much though
Or drown would the flower

I tilt the cup
The water starts flowing
Into the pot
And the soil starts absorbing

The tiny seed
Absorbs the water
Soon enough
It will be a flower

After awhile
From the soil it’s emerged
Through it’s stem
Life’s being surged

A tiny little shoot
eyes still shut
Beginning its life
A tiny little bud

Everyday
I give it sunlight and water
If you just treat it right
It will blossom into a flower

Some more time passed
It’s about two inches high
It has two little leaves
But still a small fry

Sunlight and water
Is what it gets
If you skimp out
You’ll have regrets

Mistreat it at all
Damaged it will be
Not only its physical state
But its state mentally

It’s been quite awhile
A season passed
I check on the flower
Oh what a blast

It’s finally happened
My dream come true
My little budding flower
Finally grew


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Comments:

I like it, it's pretty and poetic. I like the topic about a little seedling and then at the ending how it finally grew. Great descriptancy, and please keep me updated whenever you post some more writing! =)
~Maple

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

ZoƩ
(not registered user)

Told you you can succed in everything you wish (even make me smile when i'm down). I think you are one of the best poet of your age. So I wish you don't mind having a comment of my best teacher mrs. Poggi. She is my En teacher and I asked her to comment your poem. I'm still waiting for her respond though. Love you

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Yu are a Really good writer! I hope to read more of ur writings!

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

shanen mathew jeremie
(not registered user)

oh no u didnt, im a merceneary u have not a prair y owe me cause im a mercenery

Posted: Oct 3, 2008



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