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Poem numbero dos! (I'm taking Spanish one...). Please comment! I want to know what you think. Be honest! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 28, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Those feelings I get

When seeing your face,

Make me feel happy

All over the place.

 

I fell for you fast,

As soon as we met.

Your smile, your laugh,

Caught me in your net.

 

I wish I could say,

What I'm feeling right now,

But I can't; I'm afraid,

And I'm not quite sure how.

 

You're one of my friends,

You're second to none,

I'd tell you my feelings,

But this poem is done.


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You should give this poem to the one. VERY SINCERE

Posted: Jan 29, 2008

Author Comment:

I'd like to, but I just can't. Very complicated, but maybe someday... Thanks for your comment! I'm glad you liked it! :)

You know that I love it, Jess. What can I say? You're amazing.

Posted: Jan 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I just like comments... They make me feel better. :) You're amazing, too. Thanks again for the comment.



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