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Fate is Endless

Poem By: jfm98
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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


The fate of the world is on your shoulders
My hope for you is a fragile one
The loss of kindness is wounded when the devil walks your way
The swirling tornado is nothing compared to the fate of the world
Raindrops fall as the world dies

All hope will be lost if you do not feel compassion for the human race


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Comments:

Wow, this poem sends out a very strong messege. Very touching and inspiring. Great work. =)

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! And thanks 4 becoming a fan!

this has a really powerful message! i agree totally with mystory. keep it up! Loved it. :)

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much, and thanks 4 becoming my fan!



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