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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008 Reads: 146 Comments: 5 Likes: 4
I got nerve
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lol I love it! You did a good job and you stood true to the song. Even if it's slightly...odd *coughBADcough* props to you!!! I really love it, awesomeness to you missy!
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
haha dont let bad comments get you down. I liked it
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
I liked it a lot until the father part, and then I got confused... does your father's strength give you nerve? Is he conniving like a fox? ...I guess I thought it was going in a different direction. But interesting and fresh, for sure.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
Lol^_^!!!!! You poor thing-- I can't believe my friend-- Hugs and Kisses-- was sooo mean to you! I mean-- Hannah Montana? Lol^_^-- you did a good job though:)-- this poem deserves a like it button press^_^!
LMAO! *woo,* I'm okay now...
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
YAH!!! U rock like Chedder Cheese in December! lol Great Job...
I'm off to press the 'Like It' buttom!!
'scroll up'
'scroll up'
'CLICK!'
hehe great job girlly!
~Sarah Rain
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
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