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Submitted: Jul 13, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Kayla is my lovely Valentine
She is so beautiful, giddy and sublime
I love her always and I worry for her when she has infested bile
No matter what, she is always worth my while
We are like an Ancient mold
When we are together, we are never cold
We see old and wise men pass us by
She always cries when she sees someone die
I will always love her
I know this for sure
Our love is first rate
I knew I found my true love on the first date!
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This is a elegant piece of work. I am impressed with the use of the words. I feel a sense of your relationship expressed in this poetry. I feel moved and hope you enjoyed writing this. I enjoyed reading it. Cheers, B Leaf
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
Bravo, Wonderful, Magnificant, Welldone!!!
You are really good, what a well composed work, all my fans are really good, my man just keep it up
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
loved your story unbeliveable you are talented,please read my new story "the black sword" please wright a comment please.........hope you like it
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
this sure is great....don;t doubt ur writings and thoughts...this sure makes sense and is good...
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
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