Rain is joyfully falling on my umbrella
My raincoat crackles as rain falls onto it
The multitude of puddles crackle as I leap on top of them with great force
The joy of the storm welcomes my feet

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Submitted: Jun 25, 2008 Reads: 45 Comments: 2 Likes: 2
Rain is joyfully falling on my umbrella
My raincoat crackles as rain falls onto it
The multitude of puddles crackle as I leap on top of them with great force
The joy of the storm welcomes my feet
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awww :D yay! i LOVE the rain and this was such a cute poem to describe the rain. it makes me want to go dancing! lovely work :)
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
i've always loved the rain. :) this is really sweet! i could feel as if the poem is smiling -- you get what i mean! LoL. Loved this one too!! Keep up with those poems of yours!!
Posted: Sep 9, 2008
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