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Spring is Here!!

Poem By: jfm98
Poetry


Laurel's Challenge!!!
(Based On Undergrowth with Two Figures by Van Gogh)
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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


The trees rustle
The wind may die
The couple quickly hustles
As the birds fly

The flowers blossom
The children scare the owl whos wise
The man sees an opossum
As the woman cries

Springtime is near

In hopes to spread a multitude of cheer


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Comments:

I loved it! You did very well :) I told you not all of the good paintings were gone!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I loved this painting! U did a great job in picking it 4 me! Thanks again!

Nice Poem. I Liked It. I Have Some I've Written Myself If You'd Like To Check Them Out.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure, and Thanks!

Bravo! *Claps* That was a great poem. It really makes me feel Spring.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad u liked it!

I like this one it's very happy.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL! Thanks!

WOW...a happy and a positive tone and a lovely read.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! :-)

lovely!
very nice job :)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!



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