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Starry Eyed Monster: Those's Challenge

Poem By: jfm98
Poetry


This was a hard challenge...I hope I did okay!
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Submitted: Jul 13, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


The great stars glitter

As the great birds rigor

Awaken the monster below

Which then causes a great roe

So the monster decides to leave

Because these birds are his pet peeve

As he went up the great mountain

To wish from the great fountain

For a new place to live

So the Gods decide to give

Him his most cherished wish

They told him to take a lucky fish

And they told him the rules

That he must take the fish to the great pools

Whenhe threw the fish

And said his wish

He was transported to the sky

Even though he thought he might die

But when he became a star

He knew he would go far

Now whenever we drive a car

Or complain about a czar

We know in our heart

How this starry eyed monster was so smart

As to wish for a new home

So he would not have to live alone


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Comments:

Oh my god! I loved it! It was written in a simple way, but it held such meaning. No offense about the simple thing. Keep it up! You did a great job

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!! I'm glad u liked it!

WELLDONE MY MAN YOU ARE REALLY A GOOD WRITER THE WRITING IS REALLY WELL COMPOSED TO THE BEST PART, PEOPLE LIKE YOU SHOULD BE RETAINED IN BOOKSIE.
ANY WAY BRAVO TO YOUR WRITINGS

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

just like a fairy tale...lovely

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! This is my favorite poem/challenge I was given!



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