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Exerpt #1 from: Hook, Line & Haiku

Poem By: jjbreunig3
Poetry


Tags: haiku, fish, nature

A collection of five haikus View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 24, 2007    Reads: 41    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Cool flowing waters
cater me with plenty of…
Aquatic playmates.

Smallmouth and largemouth –
Either kind acceptable,
if they are landed.

Get them in the boat!
Fishing stories without proof
are just plain-faced lies.

Imitating bugs?
Fishing is an art form of…
Posing as insects.

The splashing fishes
are vying for attention
during school’s recess.


Copyright ©2005 Joseph J. Breunig 3rd
Webmaster, Bunganut Lake Online


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Comments:

Wow. You took something as simple as fishing and made it into this beautiful Haiku. Great job. I'll have to read this one to my sons.

Posted: Apr 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your comments. Having spent my youth at the (Crooked) River and in the woods, I've become extremely fond of Nature. --Joe

Five times good. I like fishing. I like haikus, although I have only written one.

Posted: Apr 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks! I've posted some other haikus and still have more to come. --Joe



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