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Exerpt #4 from: Hook, Line & Haiku

Poem By: jjbreunig3
Poetry


Tags: haiku, nature, fish

A collection of five haikus View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 29, 2007    Reads: 44    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Breaching the surface
largemouth jumps up to see if…
It can hold its breath.


The pregnant fishes
lounge upon the riverbed
waiting to give birth.


Dancing smallmouth bass
pirouettes around boat
looking for handouts.


Learning never ends!
For even the fish will stay…
Forever in school.


Protective coating:
Slimy perspective to us;
Life saving to them.


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Comments:

jjbreunig3:

Interesting and well written description of nature and wildlife.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Apr 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for your kind words.



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