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Tell Him of My will

Poetry By: Jlynn
Poetry


Tags: Love, Romance


He truly is the love of my life.I hope he gets to read this .He deserves the best and he's always in my prayers.I don't mind if he's with someone else as long as he's happy.Tell me what you think and I don't mind if you criticize the poem.P.S:it used to be one but the stupid editor ate all the spaces:(


Submitted:Jul 9, 2013    Reads: 10    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


1.A visitor woke me up at sunrise 2.We started to talk though I was surprised: 3.They see I'm wrong but I'm not afraid 4.I've had enough time in the shade 5.I can hear my heart racing in my head 6.I take a final breath lying on my bed 7.This is goodbye;this is farewell 8.He's whispering a secret I can't tell 9.Angel of death!Steal my soul tonight 10."Wait a bit longer,don't give up the fight" 11.Was I mistaken to grant him my heart 12."I'm afraid it's to late to regret or restart, 13.It's over so don't build up hope" 14.I'd rather hang myself with a spiked rope 15."You're refusing all the advice I am offering you" 16.But there is still one thing that you can do! 17.After you take me,hand him my will 18.And tell that I loved him and I still 19.Tell him I've died while waiting in vain 20.Tell him his love drove me insane 21."I know his name,but how does he look " 22.If I try to describe him I end up with a book 23.You'll smell a unique scent in his air 24.He's got short brown locks of silky hair 25.Charming notes of his low pitched voice 26.Will tell you why he was my final choice 27.And of his eyes I cannot speak 28.They make the strongest women feel so weak 29.I deeply admire his warm skin tone 30.For his appealing smile,he is widely known 31.A gentleman who is tall and slim 32.He's one of a kind you'll know it's him 33.Find him and tell him what u heard 34.Don't let him have the final word 35.Let him think about me for a while 36.Let me be the reason behind his smile




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