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How do I stop the voices?

Poem By: jmevee
Poetry


A cry for help... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 19, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


the heart in my chest sounds an unheard cry

my world view distorted through the tears in my eye

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Breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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my hands won't stop shaking, betraying my pain

as memories assault me again and again

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breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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I can't help but wonder what evil I've done

to deserve all these feelings that blot out the sun

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breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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people around me, I'm not on my own

but never before have I felt so alone

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breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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I wear a mask for the world, “Everything's fine!”

if only they knew I walk a very thin line

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breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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anger and anguish, depression and rage

whirl round inside me, forming my cage

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breathe out . . . breathe in . . .

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I can't stop the voices that scream in my head

maybe they'd stop if I were just . . .

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breathe out . . .


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Comments:

Wow you really gripped me at the end

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

:-) Thanks

Wow, this is an amazing piece. With each step you see the person giving up till he finally 'breathes out'. Good expression of emotions and the turmoil that happens inside. Love it.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

I tried a different style for me - shorter stanzas to reflect the urgency and desperation. Glad you think it worked.



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