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The Unwatered Seed

Poem By: jmevee
Poetry


An attempt to express longing... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 26, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


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I am lost in a desert, dying of thirst

But the oasis stays just out of reach

I am mute – unable to communicate

Having lost all method of speech

 

I am a child at a sweetshop, face pressed to the glass

Without a penny to spend

I am adrift on the ocean with no land in sight

I am a gardener with nothing to tend

 

I am longing, I am wanting

I am heartache, I am need

I am the forgotten soldier

I am the unwatered seed

 

I am the lover that’s known true love’s kiss

Whose waiting tears me in two

But I am the one that will never give up

On the love that I carry for you

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Comments:

Wow....if these are lyrics to a song, I would definitely love to hear it. Such an intriguing piece, another classic from you.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Careful, I'll start getting a big head! You have got me thinking about song lyrics now, so you never know....

Thanks whitehart :-)

jmevee

Your attempt worked brilliantly. I too felt the longing, an aching, wistful, melancholy yearning. I am not sure if I have read any of your other writing, this is so well written, I will peruse some more. (I "found" you through Bubbly's article on depression meds)

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Anna Therese, always nice to have my work appreciated. Hope you like some of my other writing. I'll check out some of your work too.

:-)



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