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Waiting for the dawn...

Poem By: jmevee
Poetry


Letting go of your one true love... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 7, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


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The hardest thing I have ever done

Was kissing you goodbye

Brushing fingers one last time

Feeling my heart die

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My soul I leave for you to hold

Until our time does come

I need it not where I now dwell

The person I must become

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I found myself in each sweet kiss

In every breath with you

Now I have to lose myself

Until my dreams come true

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I have to believe you'll come back one day

That you will set me free

Without that hope, that wish, that need

It would be the end of me

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So now I wait and yearn for you

Beloved of my heart

And when we are as one again

I swear we'll never part

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My life has lost all meaning now

My faith is bruised and torn

The sun has set upon my heart

And now I'm waiting for the dawn

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Comments:

Dawn will come..........it has to

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Belief in that is the only way to hold on to sanity, otherwise none of this thing we call life means a damn thing...

Wow, love the flow in the whole piece. A lovely ready with a wonderful message.

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Whitehart. I appreciate your comments very much :-)

umm...this relates to me a lot...dawn has got to come!!...even if it doesn't just move on! life goes on and we shall never give up :)

take care
nuttyz~

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks nuttyz...I think this is an important message to everyone. Never give up on true love. Never.

That is a pretty poem. I really enjoyed it. I have some poems I've written if you'd like to check them out. I new to this site and just joined.

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks viper, glad you liked it. Welcome to Booksie. I haven't been here long, but I'm really enjoying it - hope you do too

Thsi is a nice poem im a dark writer i liked your poem it was ver well writ

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I guess there is a darkness inside me too...



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