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my true reflection

Poem By: joanne
Poetry


look in the mirror to see your true reflection View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 10    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Thie mirror reflects the true image of me

I start to smile because now i'm free......

I decide what I want to wear

no-more do i look at your hated glare

I can choose where i want to go

no-more do i worry about you saying no

I no longer worry about seeing male friends

or you threatning our love would end

you used and abused me making me weak

you are just a bully and a control freak

but now i can do anything and go where i choose

I wish i had seen sooner I had nothing to lose

Now i;m free i'm no longer blind

your out of my life and out of my mind

The mirror reflects the true image of me

I can only smile because finally i'm free!


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Comments:

Excellent poem, I can feel the emotion behind it. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

it just how i see me now.....free,thk u 4 reading it



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