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Hang in There Buddy

Poem By: JohnstonCunning
Poetry


I wrote this after my friend Joel who finally got turned down by the girl he loved. I love ya buddy! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 29, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


I saw you suffer,

day in, day out,

I saw you happy,

and I saw you pout.



She played with your head,

She toyed with your soul,

She led you to think,

There would be no toll.



I tried to comfort you,

to supply you with company,

I tried to understnad you,

and give you my sympathy.



And now that she's left you,

full of dark depressional dispair,

My only prayer for you now,

is to move on peacefully,

To live without a care.



I want to let you know,

That I just want to be your friend,

I care a great deal about you,

I'll stick to you till the end.



So don't give up!

Just keep on trying,

Someday she'll come along,

Waiting for you sighing.



I love you my friend,

And please don't take this wrong,

I think if I thought I was in love with you,

I probably would have written you a song! XDXD


             I love you dude!
                          Johnston


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Comments:

LOL I like this one alot wonderful!! Ur a great friend ! ,/../ john~san

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Courtney! I try my best! ^-^

HAve you showed this to Joel? I'm sure it would make him realize how great of a friend you are!

Oh, and for the record, nobody deserves a girl like how you described her...

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

XD She's not that bad! XD She sweet kind and loving. She had her reasons. And yeah he just commented.

hehe thanks man. your words of encouragment have greatly inspired me!!!
XD
as a matter of fact, what you had said helped me to move on so much easier. (leah and i are dating)
so thanks man!
^^

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Really?! I knew you guys were going out, but not "going out" XD Well good for you. I'm glad to have helped.

i didn't mean to
i'm so sorry
i'm so sorry
i'm so sorry

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey, it's okay. He got through it and he's moved on. Just read his comment.

it was sweet
i laughed when you said if you were in love with him you'd write him a song XD
great touch!!!!
but it was sorta sad at he beginning....he liked gigi right? she doesn't sound very nice.....email me okay????
is this what you're sad about?

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks ^-^ I had to add that. I thought maybe he got the wrong idea! XD Yeah he liked GiGi. She's not that bad, she had her reasons. It's alright now. Umm okay I'll email you...

Wonderful. Poor Joel. I never really had a guy to like anyway. Well, It was great. Keep on writing buddy!
-Oak

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ^^ I will!

YAY! friendship is awesome. keep writing, your good.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

^o^ Thank you! Yes, Friendship is an indescribable gift to people. Nothing in the world could replace my friends! NOTHING! Hey I have poem on that too! ^-^ I have a poem on almost anything! XD Thanx, I plan to continue.

awesome jonathan you are one special person :)

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. This poem is really that applicable anymore cause the situation has changed. But I stiil love and care about him. I should write one for you now about you and your stupid desicions. sorry, but you are pretty stupid.

Great. You express how wonderful friendship is in this poem.

It's really easy to read and once you begin reading you can't stop! (At least that happened to me...)

And, lol, the last verse is a killer!!! XDDD

You will make it big, someday...just keep writing!!!! ^___^

Bye,

x UTSUKUSHII

Posted: Nov 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you UTSUKUSHI! I'm glad you could feel the real feeling of the poem. Your not so shabby yourself. I don't know if I will pursue writing or maybe I'll just keep it as a simple passion. I plan to keep writng, in fact I have and I do, I just haven't uploaded them yet. ^-^



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