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Living Locks

Poem By: JohnstonCunning
Poetry


I wrote this after playing a game. I didn't write this about the game though. I was inspired by a concept in the game where you had to break locks on people's hearts. It made me really think. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 29, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I love meeting new people,

Unseen faces I now see,

Fresh characters and personalities,

Just the fact that someone can be different,

That alone is charming to me.



But behind each smile,

Underneath each grin,

lies a swirling wave of depression,

perhaps a vile sin.



Everyone hides something,

Their secrets and their lies,

Their problems and their struggles,

Buried and hidden behind their eyes.



People are puzzle boxes,

Covered in locks of unusual size,

Breaking them can be tricky,

But inside always holds a startling surprise.



You must get to know them,

See what makes them tick,

Reveal their every weakness,

Find what makes them sick.



To truely understand people,

I feel you must endure what they sow,

you need to listen and comprehend,

to at least some of their woes.



So listen to your friends,

Show them the attention your paying,

Don't just sit around and observe,

But listen to what they are saying.


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Comments:

wow powerful lesson we must learn love this one john~san yays hehe

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

YAYS!!......wait why the yaying?? o.0 idk ^-^ Thank you!

This is so sweet! It's amazing how you find inspiration is such simple things!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

^-^ Thank you!

You are amazing, truly.
I love your poems.
I will now try to put as many words that discribe your poem:
Stupendous...astonishing....Amazing...Incredible ... Unbelievable .
Is that enough? ^^ Heh. Sorry, Im just... Your good.
Later! -Oak

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

o.0 ummm thanks!! ^o^ I write only because I have too. Otherwise, I'd explode. I'm happy you like them. I'm glad to share!

anthony
(not registered user)

markston these are amazing.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you anthony!! ^-^ Be sure to read some more now!



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