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Unfocused and Alone

Poem By: JohnstonCunning
Poetry


I wrote this randomly and not on purpose. I was writing my feelings into a blog and POP, a poem. OH YEAH....about the phone for anyone who asks. I was freaking out, because I couldn't talk to people which, i found, is something I need to do to keep sane. When it refers to verses, it's verses for my bible quiz team...=( I'm going to suck at that! XD View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 17, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


My thoughts astray,

Tumbled in an unorganized stack,

I am trying to focus,

To study and memorize the verses I lack,



See, i am not like this often,

Swirling in a dark, demented pit,

Usually i'm quite happy where my convictions sit,



With my mood deflated, and my smile erased.

I can't seem to find where my life has been placed.



Now if you think, i'm referring,

To the situation with my phone,

Your dead wrong.

This is about being alone.



This blockage in my head, t
his obstruction in my soul,

Yet I sit in this pain.

Listed every week, on the church role.



But i'll live for now,

Like every day,

I just wish my life,

Didn't have to be this way.


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Comments:

"this obstruction in my soul"
hehe
i like that line for some reason...
^^
your words ring true
"i just wish my life didnt have to be this way..."
there see i said more...
(wasnt that so much more personal?)
XD

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes Joel, you added a delightful personal touch to your comment. Thank you.

0_0 holy cow...jonathan this was really good!!! post more!!!

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? This is crap I scribbled on a blog! But if you say so. Thanks!!

you're an amazing poet john *hug* here for like always! *hug again*

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You. *hugs* I miss you guys! I have like a notebook full of poetry. The problem is, I don't have a computer to type everything up. Thanks again.

its so very good. *high five*

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

rEaLLy??! I don't think so but THANKYOU! I'm going to post more soon.

you're on a bible quiz team>????
LUCKYYYYY!!!!!!
i'd love to be on something like that

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, we just started. I haven't had time to study much though. I do write what I'm feeling. Thats how I express myself. Thank you. I'm glad you like them. Well, it'll all be clear when I explain my other summary.

O.O u have memory verses? HAHA! I had those last year =P Now I just have to know he meaning of it! Well good luck though.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

No, not just memory verses. I do it for fun and for studying. It's so I can recall big chunks of scripture. Umm thanks I guess



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