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The Drowning Lover

Poetry By: joy Milton
Poetry


Tags: Love, Romance, Sad, Hurt, Hope


When a lover loses love and hate emotions


Submitted:May 9, 2007    Reads: 270    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   


She wanted to train me

She wanted to be proud of her choice

"I will stand on the other side of sea

Swim and marry me but on time'

I started my swimming across the sea

Love gave me energy to swim

Never got tired never took rest

Sea brought many obstacles in my way

Some times shark tried to eat me away

Some times pushed me back with tides

Time never stopped for me, I was late

The magical energy of love was lost

I started drowning No hope was left

She sent the message "Good Bye"

I couldn't bear this separation oh her

At once I felt energy of hate within me

I restarted swimming more rapidly

Soon I reached the seashore

Earlier I had lost my first aim She

I was not happy to get second aim Seashore

Now I had lost my energy of hate too

Some vital force is needed to survive

I reentered the sea and started drowning

Desiring death, rebirth, and new sea journey

Or someone might come with new love energy





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