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Coffee Liqeur Kiss

Poem By: julistar
Poetry


Tags: kissing, passion

the lingering taste of someone is sometimes greater than the sum of your past with them View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 27, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Inhale you - the musky smell of a man at play

the soft hint of want as you sip

swirling around with those little kisses on my ears

you are like water to my thirsty body

quenching, bathing, stirring, bubbling, gushing

out of your mouth peaks your tongue

and i want it and you and all of this

urgent and playful you nip, you suck

you bite me on my neck, humming

your satisfaction

want you so, i try to return

but this is your thing

you push me down with the deepest of kisses

i cannot breathe, i am afraid to think

you taste like wine, like fire, like syrup

you slip into my senses and flood me

holding my lip in your teeth

then you soothe and you shush

and i beg and i ache

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Comments:

WoW! This was amazing, sensual and pretty darn erotic really. I think my heart rate sped up from reading it. Wonderful job.

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

kissing should do that to you

It is very romantic and sensual.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx

Love the title. great imagery going on here. the emotions used can be felt like a raging storm. the narrative is passionate and compels the reader to taste the flavor within. got the vote.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, i am a learning animal

wow. youre able to have intence feeling in this one. almost feels like im in the poem itself. although id rather be the guy haha. but very good none the less.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks*****



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