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Poem By: julistar
Poetry


feelings that never die, intensity that never abates View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 31, 2008    Reads: 108    Comments: 7    Likes: 7   


So there you are

Yes I'm surprised to see you too

How are things with you

Oh that's nice. OK then

Pardon, yes, i remember that

But it was so long ago

Silly to think about such things now

at our age

well, you know, we aren't

kids again and that kind of thing is just

childish

You want to what?

Oh don't be silly

That would prove nothing

Nothing...nothing...nothing

The truth? Sure, I've thought of you

...and I longed for you...

...and wondered if i dreamt how my legs

would shake when u were done with me

and my mouth would go dry

imagining all the things left to do

...and i drifted there once too often

ending up here...not quite by accident

but a head on collision

with you


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Comments:

Another great job! I can picture them in my mind; he's a little flirty, but she doesn't want to open herself up again. They've never forgotten each other. It was beautiful. Was it based on situation that you actually had or just your own thoughts?

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Nah, this is not my style, but i'm glad i captured it well.

Oh So sweet....glad that love is still alive between them....

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for your comment

hi! juli. u truly bring giddiness alive. heart-warming poem. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

this is my way of telling people's stories without telling their secrets

That was very nice. It spoke of so much love.

Posted: Jun 2, 2008

Author Comment:

plausibly denied love...but love nonetheless. Thanks

spicy meatball here. enjoyed it very much. a great narrative factor playing right to the readers attention. flows very well and the crisp phrases is something that never bores me. Once again, you got my vote.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

...thanks

Oooh sucka!
Loved it.
subtle and vicious and sexy!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

;)thanks********

Nice one. I just met someone dear to me, even though I only met him once four years ago, and the feeling that came rushing back were just like in this poem. Thank you!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

You're welcome, you're welcome, Naughty!



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