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Just a child

Poem By: justbe123
Poetry


Tags: life, childhood

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Submitted: Sep 5, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Can you imagine a child

Taught only to self hate

Questioning their very worth, validity & fate.

Taught blame and anger

Always at fault, deeply ashamed, superego gone berserk.

A subordinate and nothing else matters.

Revere one and only and repent to one and only

Like a god, an omnipotent force –

However this god remorseless and scheming, waiting to catch you off guard.

The only authoritative voice – the tormentor

Trying to prove your point pointless and existence insignificant.

Only a child, torn and feeble –

How to respond?

Exclaiming lies just lies – but no one to help or even believe you.

Alone in this world.

This child forever alone.

How to make peace with the battles and knifes that dug so deep?

A spirit that lives on, resilient and hopeful.


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Comments:

wow. really good. really deep, too. it's so sad and so full of emotion.

i'm sorry I can't give a good comment right now...i'm so tired I could fall asleep on the keyboard...

I really like this, though. It's good:)

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

very emotional,I really liked it! keep writing!

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

cheers.

hi! j. this just shows, despite suppression, one must remain hopeful and positive. no one should be that powerful to throttle one's spirit.

keep up the good work. lol. ;-)

Posted: Sep 7, 2008



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