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Teething Tither, Such a Wither

Poem By: Justin Lee Moreaux
Poetry


This poem is to be interpreted in many ways. One interpretation that is most common: "Have faith. Especially in yourself." The poem conveys a persons feelings after losing somebody. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 10, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Teething Tither, Such a Wither... By: J. L. Moreaux


Where'dst thou love,
When the leaves fall dead?
The love has never ended,
Our mothers have spread.

Safe am I! Oh, I care great!
Open the box, our lovely fate.
The mortal sins upon us, bad.
These, which make us tearful, sad.

Aye! Say the glass half full!
It speaks truth, comforting whole.
Bringing me water so pure.
Yes! This may be the constant cure!

Drink from the cup of Eden!
It has already been corrupt.
We know this is the right thing.
The happiness will soon erupt!



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Comments:

beautifully written. my, you do have a great talent. Keep it up!
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you. Haha. I'm not new to poetry or writing. I'm just new to this site. Thanks for the comment also!

this is really good!!! i liked it a lot!!

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, thank you so much for the comment. I'd also like to thank you for the time reading it. :D

Woah! That was 100% epic material! Amazing word choice!

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! :D I really appreciate the comments! :D



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