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Terrible Romance

Poem By: Justin Lee Moreaux
Poetry


A poem of love that goes terribly wrong. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 10, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Terrible Romance By: J. L. Moreaux



A love that feels like acid on your lips.
As you kiss, and feel with fingertips.
This love; its not the right time move it.
No love; its easier not to prove it.

A lost cause and missed feeling.
One must know their ceiling,
When they are constantly in bed
Crying about the dead.

This fear of losing your mother,
Father or other family against the world
Is a feeling that says the other
thing that had me in my bed curled.

"You lost your mother, Heather."
This should never be said.
A passion lost for ere'.
A passion that has bled.



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Has some enotions to the under current.

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you much!

very well written, my favourit lines were the first two
*A love that feels like acid on your lips.
As you kiss, and feel with fingertips.*
You have a way with words, don't ever stop. haha
Steph:)

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks friend! I'm thankful for your comments! :D

I was about to say the exact same, steph beat me to it...I could actually feel the first two lines as I read them, nice! :)

Posted: Apr 24, 2008



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