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This poem tells a story of the hardships of winter and how people react to the burning sensation of the cold winter snow. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 10, 2008 Reads: 28 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
What of Winter? By: J. L. Moreaux
What is winter
That unveiled?
The snowy plunders?
The warmth had failed.
Cold that burns.
Heat that scolds us.
Which one is that of thus?
Amid the bleak dreary winter
We have to stay clothed.
Though snowballs, and fury
Are justly loathed.
Feel the sun passing
As the rainclouds sway.
The warmth will come again
Bring us outside, in vain.
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Excellent description of winter. Seeing the sun in the snow is like getting an A+ in school: A sign of hope! I'm not a fan of winter, obviously. Keep up the perfect work! Don't you ever lose this tallent!
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
bahh, i hate winter, your peom just reminded me of that, lol. Well the snow's all gone here now:). haha, anyway, your peom had a really great flow to it, like I could sing it, lol. it was so well composed and described, you painted a picture in my head. I loike it alot!
Steph:)
Posted: May 5, 2008
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