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That I Love About You

Poetry By: K L Copley

Part of a song which I had writer block on so I changed it into a poem. The whole point of the poem is for it to feel unfinished because the list is unfinished. Tell me what you guy's think ;) x

Submitted:Oct 6, 2011    Reads: 14    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

We were in college and you looked like a rock star

Always telling me that you were gunna go far

I just smiled and laughed along with you

Knowing you would be gone 'fore I could tell you

That I have a long list of things that a love about you,

Number one is your attitude, you're never in a mood,

You're always smiling, even though you're hiding,

What you truly feel inside,

Number two is the way your hair shines, in the moonlight,

I could watch you all night

Laughing and joking, about the stupid little things

That don't mean a thing, to me or you oh oh,

My list doesn't stop there; it goes on to number 45,

But I just don't have the time

To list all of the things that I want to tell you,

That I love about you.


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