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My Lifetime

Poem By: KarenMeadows
Poetry


Tags: life, death, journey, home

A walk through my life View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 3, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 4    Likes: 4   


Steady walking all my days

Toward the rising Son

The joys of life blowing past me

Like the gentle breeze on a summers day

The whispers of love carressing my ears

Bring peace to my wondering soul

I see the goal ahead

Shining upon the path set by my youth

Its harder now,

Lifes burdens press upon me

Trying to hold me to the earth

I see the memories of life surrounding me

The good, the bad

Blending together to make,

A mosaic of my own

Individual, like my life

I press foward

Knowing that to have a beginning,

One must have an end

As the light gets closer

I slow down

I gather the web of my life around me

I inhale the scents

And stroke the many textures

I relish the flood of emotion that engulfs me

Then I release my grip on this earthly realm

I allow the joy of the Light embrace me

Lift me

Gather me into its bosom

Like a lost child come home

I have wandered through my life,

Thousands of miles

Now my journey has ended

For I am home


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Comments:

thats a nice poem.for noe lets sy i'm just a lost child to but u have make it through out your journey.God's amazing grace

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you, God is completely amazing to me :)

Very well written. Love your work. KEEP IT UP! YEAH! I really enjoyed the emotion and the breaks completely emphasized what you needed to say.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very very much

KarenMeadows:

Well written. Liked the smooth flowing style and presentation. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for reading my work, it means a lot to me

Thats the best one ive read yet.
I hope that our journey will be
as you`ve described. How wonderful
that would be.Beautiful writing karen.
thank you,angellynn.

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you again for taking the time to read it. I appreciate your comments more than you will know. Karena Meadows



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